Rhino story

We have been using animal pictures for motivation in writing. I choose a rhino picture to write about.

On a sparkly night I had a drink at the waterhole. Then I went to Jax's party and a monster crocodile was behind him. He crashed into a tree, he said ow! and he cried.  He run away. Then I went to the little brown owl and I talked to it. Then I went to bed.